Holy shit that was funny.
Enraged Battle Ox! *pastes on a set of mean eyebrows*
The style and animation are phenomenal. Those fight scenes look incredible!
The way he says Bees is genius.
The art and animation were really good. The scene in bed at night and morning were particular highlights. I loved your use of colour to signify the dark room and the highlights on their skin from the moon. The animation where he sat up in bed was very good. I felt your animation actually progressed during the course of the animation.
Now, as you already know this is the reason why you didn't get 5 stars and it was quite simply down to yor audio quality. It was inaudible at times and I couldn't understand what was being said. Upgrade the microphone and find an ideal recording space and you are on your way to being a top quality animator. Best of luck!
Bob certainly is having a rough day at the office isn't he? I'll open by saying that this is obviously heavily influenced by the Madness series by Krinkels. By the looks of it you have completely copied what Krinkels has drawn in his series but adapted it for your own purposes. It would be nice to see an animation from you with your own style without the use of Krinkels "crutches" heavily supporting your animation. It was very apparent in the smoke effect. However, you show potential. It's a great process learning to animate. Would love to see what you can do in the future!
Thanks... i guess? but i am gunna try using my Madness Combat guys and get the ropes then try my own style if that makes sence
Graphics weren't bad, the areas I would suggest focusing on are the animation itself, the voice acting and gathering sound effects. The lightning in the back was a bit lackluster due to no sound. Possibly upgrading your microphone would be beneficial also. However, with that said it shows potential. Keep it up :)
This was an old Project I had Stash! up i Just found it and decide to Polish it a bit and see what happens I originally Cancel it. because i wanted to focus on my own characters, but soon i realize I needed Recognition, so! when i get my characters out there I will have the best and biggest crowds watching My Masterpieces (WIP), it's All part of the plan.
Don't Worry I,m on Top of That! I Keep Always Updating it while it's Still Under Judgement. After that what ever I could Make in that time i will try to fix a lot of problems. sometimes i Don't why i don't see them when on working on them. and as for the audio I did it on my laptop i will use my Micro Recorder to Make the Sound More Dynamic If that makes sense. if not i,m sure other future projects will, the lighting is suppose to be a silent type no, sound just flashes.
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this is 1 of my quick flash animations, this is nothing compare to when i,m serious.
I,m just having fun. I Can't decide between motion tween and frame by frame.
and i Don't really like motiontween that much it takes the fun out animating, but it makes things faster i guess i leave the frame by frame for the real stuff! well anyways nice knowing ya! i,m going back to the drawing board, so! keep coming back for more i have tons of really!! GOOD!! Projects!! to bring here.
The frame by frame was pretty solid. Only places I would really point out to focus on are your timing and walk cycles. Your backgrounds were fine for the movie but it would be nice to see more detailed environments in the future. Keep up the good work. Well done!
Animation wasn't bad and the script could have been a little cleaner. Overall though good effort.
Animation was great, the style and feel of the animation were also great. I gave you a 4 as I was struggling to understand the meaning. Not sure if I'm the only one! Anyways, great animation.
That was awesome! Great art style and good fluid animation!
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